http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J5Px0kyInkU&feature=relmfu
After making more changes based on feedback which included of editing, refilming and changing the storyline/script, we'd decided that we were getting close now to our final product and just needed to make a few more changes. Again from feedback, the changes we made on this draft included of:
- Continuity - this included of when I (Tony) was hiding behind the wall and the camera panned up, and as it panned down I wasn't there. This was seen as a continuity error and wasn't liked from what feedback we had, and therefore removed. Another continuity error was when I (Tony) bumped into the extra as I tried to get away
- The ending - We refilmed it as we had feedback which said it seemed unrealistic and we included a variety of different shots in the refilm
- The font was changed on the freeze frames to represent modern gangsters better
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