After receiving some very constructive and valuable feedback, we went away and produced a second draft of our film opening with some key changes made and here it is:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gY30jrDCJNQ&feature=relmfu
In this second draft we changed a lot around, including the camera shots/angles, we've done a massive amount of changes on the editing to make it a higher quality and professional looking film opening, and a different soundtrack. These changes definitely give it a more professional feel and add a lot more tension than our previous draft. However, having received more feedback now we realise the continuity issues are still slightly there, and we had some things we wanted to change ourselves to make the opening better and make more sense. We have decided also to make some more slight changes in the storyboard/script to better our storyline and the opening itself, which was another thing we were told to improve on., so we are now going to produce a third draft and I will keep the blog updated.
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