First draft of our main task

We have now produced a rough draft of our main task using what we've come up with through research, our storyboard and our script - and here it is:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6t2VXxHC3pI

This covers the basics of what we want in the final product, and we know we have a lot to improve on. This was made and released at this stage because we wanted feedback on the basics that we have at the moment, so then we could go ahead and make changes and perfect what we had. After receiving feedback now we understand the main issues are continuity, dialogue, quality and some filming errors, we've decided to work on these issues and will produce a second draft to gain more feedback.

Any of your feedback is appreciated. Thankyou.